mañana de primavera al rozar las flores  suenan un poquito

mañana de primavera
al rozar las flores
suenan un poquito

Spring morning
as my hand grazes the blossoms,
they sound a little

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Luz Maldonado López

( Luz Maldonado López )

第19回The 19th 2025-2026年2025-2026 スペイン大会Spain Contest

テーマ 「おと」 Theme "Sound" 大賞作品 JAL Grand Prize Winner

The choice of the word ‘al rozar’ (to touch lightly) is marvelous. I sensed a deep tenderness towards the flowers and plants. On a gentle spring morning, you have captured the faint sound of friction at the moment your fingertips touched the flowers, recognizing it as the lovely ‘voice’ of the plants. The vivid transition in the description from sight to touch and then to sound is superb. As if in response to the author’s gentle approach to the plants, the soft voices emerge from the petals, leaves and stems as they brush against one another. The fact that the author did not miss these sounds suggests they are quite close to the plants. These voices are like the breathing sounds of spring, a season teeming with life. The illustration is also brimming with colorful flowers, each playing its own unique melody. A spring garden is just like a natural orchestra.

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